• Pretoria, Gauteng, South Africa

Mediclinic

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First, I’ll start by understanding the original content. It’s for a nursing diploma program leading to registration as a General Nurse. The key points are the program duration, purpose, outcomes, and application requirements.

I notice some redundancy, like “MAIN PURPOSE OF JOB” and “MAIN PURPOSE OF COURSE” seem repetitive. I’ll condense that into a single clear purpose statement.

The original has a PDF link for details. I’ll keep that but make the text around it more inviting. Phrases like “Please visit the link below” sound a bit stiff. Maybe “For detailed admission criteria, download the program prospectus below.”

I should structure the information clearly. Perhaps start with the position title, location, and closing date. Then outline the program’s purpose, duration, outcomes, and requirements. Make sure each section is easy to scan.

The original mentions Employment Equity Plan and preference for internal candidates. I’ll include that but phrase it more positively, like “aligned with our Employment Equity Plan.”

I’ll avoid any jargon or overly formal language to keep it simple and approachable. Also, ensure the formatting is clean with line breaks between sections for readability.

Finally, I’ll check that all necessary info is included and nothing important is lost in the rewrite. Make sure the call to action is clear, and the tone is professional yet friendly.

Done. Let me put it all together now.

Nursing Diploma Programme – General Nurse Registration

Location: Pretoria, South Africa
Closing Date: 30 June 2025
Reference Number: 59560
Programme Coordinator: Ronell Morrick

About the Programme

This 3-year diploma programme prepares successful candidates for registration as General Nurses (GN R.171 of 8 March 2013). Upon completion, graduates will be qualified to provide comprehensive nursing care across various healthcare settings and manage nursing units.

Programme Benefits

  • SAQA-recognised qualification
  • Hands-on clinical training
  • Competency in diverse healthcare environments

Admission Requirements

For detailed admission criteria, download the programme prospectus:

Download Programme Prospectus (PDF)

Application Notes

  • Fixed-term contract employees should apply as external candidates
  • Preference given to applicants aligning with Mediclinic’s Employment Equity Plan
  • Internal candidates must meet minimum requirements

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