• Wadeville, Gauteng, South Africa

Premier FMCG (Pty) Ltd.

Okay, so I need to rewrite this job advertisement to make it more professional and natural. Let me start by reading through the original to understand what’s required.

First, the job title is “Industrial Engineering Graduate” but in the description, it mentions “Electrical Engineering graduate.” That’s a bit confusing. I should check which one is correct. Maybe it’s a typo. The department is Production, and the site is Mister Sweet in Wadeville, Gauteng.

The closing date is June 6, 2025, and the reference number is PRE250527-2. The job type is Graduate, so it’s targeted at recent graduates. The key requirements are Grade 12 and a National Diploma in Electrical Engineering, along with some experience in office management, MS Office skills, and understanding production processes.

The job description talks about working in the Continuous Improvement Department, supporting production and operational developments, and developing soft skills. There’s also mention of project management and training/mentoring.

Now, I need to make this more professional but keep it simple. I’ll start with a clear title, then sections like Position Overview, Key Responsibilities, Qualifications, Experience Requirements, and How to Apply. I should correct any inconsistencies, like the job title. Since the description mentions Electrical Engineering, I’ll go with that unless told otherwise.

I’ll use bullet points for clarity and keep the language straightforward. I’ll also ensure the formatting is clean without any unnecessary HTML tags, just basic spans and line breaks. I’ll avoid jargon to keep it accessible.

Let me start drafting:

– Position title: Electrical Engineering Graduate
– Department: Production
– Location: Wadeville, Gauteng
– Closing date: June 6, 2025

Then a brief overview of the role, followed by key responsibilities in bullet points. Next, the qualifications and experience needed. Finally, a note on mentoring and the application process.

I’ll make sure each section is clearly separated and easy to read. I’ll check for any repetitive information and streamline it. For example, the key outputs section repeats some of the job description, so I’ll consolidate that into responsibilities.

Okay, I think that covers it. Let me put it all together now.

Electrical Engineering Graduate Opportunity

Location: Mister Sweet, Wadeville, Gauteng
Closing Date: June 6, 2025
Reference: PRE250527-2

Position Overview

We’re looking for an Electrical Engineering graduate to join our confectionery production team. This role offers hands-on experience in engineering practices within a dynamic food manufacturing environment.

Key Responsibilities

  • Support production and operational improvements in our Continuous Improvement Department
  • Manage projects from planning to completion within production
  • Develop professional skills including teamwork, time management, and communication
  • Work directly on real production challenges and business initiatives

Requirements

Education:
– Grade 12 certificate
– National Diploma in Electrical Engineering

Skills & Experience:
– Proficient in MS Office
– Strong communication skills (written and verbal)
– Ability to work under pressure and meet deadlines
– Basic understanding of end-to-end production processes
– Detail-oriented with good organizational skills

What We Offer

  • Practical engineering experience
  • Formal and informal mentoring
  • Professional skills development
  • Relevant training programs

This is an excellent opportunity for a recent graduate to launch their engineering career in the food manufacturing industry.

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